I prefer seeing a couple get together without many side plots so there were just a little too many side plots for me. I was mostly only interested in the main couple and seeing how they were together. There were a lot of side plots and they really took away from the main couple for me. Sixth, there were just too many plot points developed in the story for me. I don’t mind insta love most times but that was a bit too much for me. At 25%, when they knew each other for one day and hadn’t even kissed yet, they were already throwing the love word around. I just wanted them to discuss it before they got together because the switch to them being not together and them being together was very jarring to me since they never talked about it.įifth, his was just a little too insta for me. Because how did they know they want the same kind of relationship if they never talked about it? They just randomly got together without even saying that they are attracted to each other or wanted a relationship. And they had barely talked then and they had never talked about what they want in a relationship so that part felt a little jarring to me. At 14% they were already calling each other daddy and my boy and almost in a relationship. I loved how Gruff just always wanted the best for Lyle and made sure that Lyle was treated well.įourth, they got together a bit too fast for my taste. Gruff was such a sweet daddy and it made my heart melt how he was always telling Lyle to eat his food or to take care of himself. He had laid eyes on Lyle once and he already was referring to him as his boy and being super possessive over him and I absolutely loved that. Third, Gruff was such a good daddy to me. Second, I really liked that the snow white twist is Lyle and a family of seven brothers who are all gay and daddies (instead of Snow White and the seven dwarfs), that's such a fun twist on the subject and i'm excited to read about everyone else in the family. Sadly the plot of the book just lost me after a while. It really was a fascinating premise and it made me want to read more of the book. We had Lyle lost in the forest and he was sure he was going to die and praying for a daddy to save him. They fall in love and realize that they would be good in a daddy and boy relationshipįirst, this book really fascinated it with its start. Gruff takes care of Lyle and saves him from death. He picks Lyle up and brings him to his family's house. Gruff is taking a walk in the forest and he finds Lyle there.

Lyle is lost in a forest on his eighteenth birthday. And I had a good time reading it, but sadly it wasn't all that I wanted it to be. A MM Snow White retailing with daddy kink? Yes please give it to me.

Snow Twink by Sue Brown